Hi, is this text grammatically correct? He should listen to official language for an award document. Thank you! (It was translated from German to English using Google Translate.) ,It is important to pay greater attention to the faster than average completion of complete musical maturity, as well as the obligatory personal dedication that is directly related to it." Original text: ,Es gilt, ein gesteigertes Augenmerk auf die berdurchschnittlich beschleunigte Vollendung der vollstndigen musikalischen Reife, sowie der damit in unmittelbarem Zusammenhang stehenden, obligatorischen persnlichen Hingabe zu legen."
The English text looks good grammatically, but there are some parts that look odd. I don't, for example, understand what "completion of musical maturity" means.